Scott looks so distinct from the large majority of the art I have seen him in. That is definitely part of the appeal that I see. The feel and the flow of the lines really bring this work together. It is very clean and quite crisp. The details are fantastic; Ramona's outfit came out quite nice. I would like to add that the perspective and tilt you used puts an interesting feel to it; this would be a fantastic poster.
That said, I do not really like the colour contrast for the lines. The blue does not feel nor translate the excitement you feel when looking at the work.
Great work overall. I hope to see a fully-coloured version, if possible!